Question about editing

2022.01.17 00:42 HarGeo Question about editing

I have been looking at some advice on Reddit and the interwebs about self-editing and I feel like predominant the advice is: no adverbs, no prepositions, no participles, no modifiers. Don't get fancy with your word choice. Shorten your sentences.
I understand the shift way from purple prose (or that purple prose is kind of just for yourself to enjoy), but won't the sacrifice of half the grammatical tools of the English language make everyone's writing voice sound the same? Feeling a bit lost and confused. Is this just a trend or is it long-standing advice?
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2022.01.17 00:42 supergamerd64 Leaning to draw human oc

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2022.01.17 00:42 Silvermouse640 Struggling...

Hello all and thanks in advance for any advice/information!
Background: I'm dealing with lifelong hereditary GAD that left untreated turns into bad DRDP and is debilitating. That being said I've been on a ton of different meds over the years since I first started having panic attacks at age 15 (I'm now 35). I've had the most luck with Zoloft but continue to bounce on and off of it due to the extreme emotional blunting that it causes, the first time I took it I did not experience this, but I was also on Vyvanse/Adderall for extreme chronic fatigue (my untreated GAD manifests this way as it morphs into DRDP). Needless to say I lost the battle with the stimulants as they inevitably just increase my overall anxiety because the comedown off them is so ridiculously awful.
All that being said, I've since been on just the Zoloft (three times now) and keep having to stop due to the emotional blunting; it feels like I have zero emotional range, I'm just stuck somewhere in the middle of sad and happy and it's super annoying not being able to get excited or happy about anything in life. So my question is, has anyone had any experience getting past this, is there another medication you can take that will help with this while taking Zoloft?
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2022.01.17 00:42 BahLo- [CA-AB] [H] Keyboard help

Hello all, if this is the wrong place to post I apologize.
I’ve been eyeing custom keyboards for awhile now. But don’t have the time or even really understand how to build them.
Looking for someone to build a custom keyboard for me, black and white themed. Not sure what most of the phrases even mean so if anyone has the time to help out would be greatly appreciated.
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2022.01.17 00:42 Art_bykay_ They are seriously too cute 🐾

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2022.01.17 00:42 bot_neen Sismo de magnitud 5.4 en Oaxaca - Las Noticias

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2022.01.17 00:42 Jrodtwo3 How can I keep up with this trend. Where can I find release dates and who has a good twitter or Instagram to watch for latest drops?

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2022.01.17 00:42 ZoolShop LeBron Issues Apology, Lakers Make Decision On Stanley Johnson - Lakers Nation

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2022.01.17 00:42 iamcalifw 🐕 Mega Floki Just stealth launched 10 minutes |CG/CMC incoming |No Airdrop | 🚀Early Low Cap just launched 🐕 Ownership Renounced | LP Locked 1 year

🐕 Mega Floki 🐕
WELCOME TO " Mega Floki " 🎖
Telegram : https://t.me/megaflokiofficial
📌THE HIGHEST DOGE REWARDS PAYING TOKEN EVER ON BINANCE SMART CHAIN .
"GOING TO WIN THE RACE FROM ALL Floki COINS " Mega Floki decentralized Binance Smart Chain Token our mission is to bring people an ease bsc transfers, strong community, and sustainability. It's a 100% community token, every holder should promote it, if you want to pump your investment, you need to do some effort.
Alright guys, you all are so early 😍 Huge profit coming..... Yes... We make sure all is ready and safe and in few mins time ... We will be renouncing ownership soon .... Great time to bag more, Perfect time if you are getting this now.🥳 Mission Bringing people together through the ease of our Bsc transfers, strong community, and push for sustainability. We may be strong apart. But we’re better when we’re grow together. This is safe. Liquidity is locked and ownership is renounced. No way of a rug pull! Dev seems transparent and trustworthy.
✅ Buy & Sell 0%
✅ Locked Liquidity
✅ Verified Smart Contract
✅ Promos after launch
✅ Based Team
✅ Stealth Launch
✅ Liquidity locked
✅ Total supply 1,000,000,000
✅ White paper is out, see website
🐕Telegram : https://t.me/megaflokiofficial
🐕Contract: 0x6689e240a2817a34e65947d40dfe26b3a985a1d4
🐕Pancakeswapv2 : https://pancakeswap.finance/swap?outputCurrency=0x6689e240a2817a34e65947d40dfe26b3a985a1d4
🐕LP Locked 1 year : https://deeplock.io/lock/0x57ccb329940f2017d07fef8ce1eab0befbfbd7e5
Ownership Renounced : https://bscscan.com/token/0x6689e240a2817a34e65947d40dfe26b3a985a1d4#readContract
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2022.01.17 00:42 killingmemesoftly Sonofabeech

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2022.01.17 00:42 DevinCauley-Towns 🍁Canadian loopers, I need your help! What is the quickest and/or cheapest way to purchase LRC **without fiat on-ramp**?

I’m fairly new to crypto and thus do not already have a wallet or existing crypto provider. Additionally, I’ve tried using the fiat on-ramp and neither my visa debit nor credit cards will allow me to purchase crypto with them (I’ve tried calling each institution and they’ve all said it’s a hard “NO”). This leaves me with essentially 2 options:
1) Purchase LRC directly via one of the supporting CEX (and load account using EFT or wire transfer). May or may not transfer to Loopring wallet shortly thereafter, depending on costs.
2) Purchase ETH on alternative crypto service (not sure the correct terminology) and transfer ETH to Loopring wallet, ideally L2, then convert to LRC once in Loopring wallet.
For further context, I’m looking at purchasing ~$1k LRC, so base it off of that when factoring in costs.
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2022.01.17 00:42 thebigsauce20 Heading down to warnbro nude beach tomorrow if anyone is keen to head down there

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2022.01.17 00:42 Volduloup This backyard boogie bloomed after a week long torrential downpour. Located on a volcanic island in the South Pacific. Anyone have an idea of the species?

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2022.01.17 00:42 yellowtonkatruck Life today is too competitive to be enjoyable

Whether it’s jobs, relationships, education etc. There is simply too many people trying to do the exact same thing thing to be able to enjoy it without spending countless hours and countless failures working towards any goal. Are our children going to face this, but even more extreme? I look around me and I see people constantly depressed, anxious and downright miserable because the satisfaction of completing anything is few and far between.
I know what you’re thinking, how is this unpopular? Well everyone keeps telling me that anything worth doing takes hard work and dedication, and that’s what make it worth it. But the fact is most of us will never do the things we actually want to do. We’ve developed a world where we will fall short, where your best simply good enough most of the time.
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2022.01.17 00:42 hailynnx How do I (27F) deal with my partner’s (29M) addiction?

My guy and I have been friends for 10 years, in a relationship for 3 and now have a 6 month old hybrid together. I have a past sprinkled with trauma and recently started therapy to sort through all of my unprocessed shit - including my biological father’s substance abuse/addiction issues, volatility, stepfather’s abuse/addiction issues, and ultimately PTSD, an intense fear of abandonment, and deep seated rage for the male species. I’m including these details because I feel they directly relate to how I’ve handled my partner’s alcohol addiction over the past 1.5-2 years.
It started socially of course - we’d go out, drink with friends, whatever. I saw nothing of it. Then I noticed he was drinking at home regularly, almost daily (6-12 beers, cup after cup of liquor, etc), and we had a conversation - it was calm. I told him I was concerned for his health and our future, explained that it was a trigger from my past, and that was the first time he promised me he‘d slow down, that it wasn’t a problem.
Several broken promises, arguments, lies, screaming matches, hidden 6 & 12 packs later… I’m exhausted. I’ve made excuses for him, like ’well, he works hard and that’s how he relaxes.’ I’ve blamed myself. I generally haven’t handled it well, especially during my pregnancy. He would binge and I’d go into attack mode. I’d beg him to stop, tell him I wasn’t going to stay if he didn’t, tell him I’d rather be a single mom than our kid deal with the same shit that I did, and worse (much, much worse that I’m not proud of). I usually consider myself to be a deeply empathetic human but after repeatedly being lied to, not so much.
I’m convinced his addiction is linked to the mental illness we both share, and I want nothing more than to lean on and love each other through the dark shit. I’m also convinced I’m stuck in the cycle of taking anger associated with my daddy issues (specifically related to addiction) out on him every time I hear him slurring, see him stumbling around, cringe at the sound of another beer being opened as he sits in front of his PC… all while I’m responsible for the baby we created, together.
I know addiction is fucking rough, that ultimately only he can make the decision to quit. But how long do I stand by while I watch him destroy himself? How do I set boundaries without making him feel worse, and how can I support him without enabling him? I’ve read the articles, I’ve done the googling, and AA/12 steps isn’t for everyone. Help.
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2022.01.17 00:42 Jaimierugularsfan Tell me the difference (plz don't hate me Henwy)

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2022.01.17 00:42 crytoloover Web3, NFT2.0, the metaverse and a ‘human renaissance’: The tech trends to watch out for in 2022

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2022.01.17 00:42 deadlandsMarshal The exact opposite of the HAL 9000.

Just finished TFW CYAN storyline and the relationship between the humans and CYAN brought a real tear to my eye.
Hephaestus seems like the HAL on steroids and meth, but the interactions with CYAN were genuine and sweet.
This game is amazing!
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2022.01.17 00:42 Ok_Bat_3975 is it easy for drs to detect aids ?

ik someone who got extremely depressed and stopped taking their meds for about 5 years or more maybe we dont know .. he hasnt been sick in years but lately hes been horrible . he noticed his walking was weird and couldnt even go to the bathroom without help , he went to the er and he had brain legions . not sure about the testing but they let him go after treating his phenomena for a couple days ... fast foward 3 days later hes back and being admitted this time they find brain legions .. he stays in the hospital for about a couple weeks and do all kinds of testing , give medicine for some infection but dont give any more info ( could be his brain fog ) he goes home and two days later , his body is completely stiff , they ruled out stroke .. but im afraid theyre missing something or maybe he just isnt able to comprehend what the doctors are telling him .. his brain is slowing down , speech slurred , can barely move and almost choking on everything he eats ? wth is going on .. he is young around 28 but this is so sad and we are not sure if we should be preparing ourselvs for his passing soon . its just getting worse and worse . anyone been through this ? can anyone give me some insight if theyve been through something similar . thanks
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2022.01.17 00:42 AidenPearce699 The crowd and the talking in this market makes me feel that the game is alive ❤

The crowd and the talking in this market makes me feel that the game is alive ❤
https://preview.redd.it/csn7e9ip56c81.png?width=1680&format=png&auto=webp&s=cb1a93c606dda219885524e79d95de065ff560d2
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2022.01.17 00:42 1NFINIT Fuck you kevin

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2022.01.17 00:42 iamcalifw 🐕 Mega Floki Just stealth launched 10 minutes |CG/CMC incoming |No Airdrop | 🚀Early Low Cap just launched 🐕 Ownership Renounced | LP Locked 1 year

🐕 Mega Floki 🐕
WELCOME TO " Mega Floki " 🎖
Telegram : https://t.me/megaflokiofficial
📌THE HIGHEST DOGE REWARDS PAYING TOKEN EVER ON BINANCE SMART CHAIN .
"GOING TO WIN THE RACE FROM ALL Floki COINS " Mega Floki decentralized Binance Smart Chain Token our mission is to bring people an ease bsc transfers, strong community, and sustainability. It's a 100% community token, every holder should promote it, if you want to pump your investment, you need to do some effort.
Alright guys, you all are so early 😍 Huge profit coming..... Yes... We make sure all is ready and safe and in few mins time ... We will be renouncing ownership soon .... Great time to bag more, Perfect time if you are getting this now.🥳 Mission Bringing people together through the ease of our Bsc transfers, strong community, and push for sustainability. We may be strong apart. But we’re better when we’re grow together. This is safe. Liquidity is locked and ownership is renounced. No way of a rug pull! Dev seems transparent and trustworthy.
✅ Buy & Sell 0%
✅ Locked Liquidity
✅ Verified Smart Contract
✅ Promos after launch
✅ Based Team
✅ Stealth Launch
✅ Liquidity locked
✅ Total supply 1,000,000,000
✅ White paper is out, see website
🐕Telegram : https://t.me/megaflokiofficial
🐕Contract: 0x6689e240a2817a34e65947d40dfe26b3a985a1d4
🐕Pancakeswapv2 : https://pancakeswap.finance/swap?outputCurrency=0x6689e240a2817a34e65947d40dfe26b3a985a1d4
🐕LP Locked 1 year : https://deeplock.io/lock/0x57ccb329940f2017d07fef8ce1eab0befbfbd7e5
Ownership Renounced : https://bscscan.com/token/0x6689e240a2817a34e65947d40dfe26b3a985a1d4#readContract
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2022.01.17 00:42 Trilly1602 Mega aerodactyl, adding 10 4822 4413 5691

4822 4413 5691
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2022.01.17 00:42 ReelSteele27 I want to convert an mov to webm and keep the alpha channel, but Advanced Features is just blank?

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2022.01.17 00:42 Willing-Clock-8884 100% Brain Usage | Lucy | Scarlett Johansson, Morgan Freeman | Amazon Prime Video

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